Comments on: underway writers workshop 1 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop The Official Dana Stabenow Web Site Tue, 18 Nov 2008 09:29:20 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: Dana Stabenow » here endeth my patrol on the uscg cutter munro http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-10048 Dana Stabenow » here endeth my patrol on the uscg cutter munro Sat, 12 May 2007 04:33:26 +0000 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-10048 [...] The wonder in the eyes of my underway writers’ workshop as they learn what works and what doesn’t. I didn’t know I could do that. [...] […] The wonder in the eyes of my underway writers’ workshop as they learn what works and what doesn’t. I didn’t know I could do that. […]

]]> By: Syntha Green http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9226 Syntha Green Mon, 07 May 2007 05:30:26 +0000 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9226 Couldn't post earlier, too busy crying after I read Leaving for Work. Can I blame it on the after pregnancy hormones? The baby's only 8 months old (lol). It's easier to just not think about it, but makes it emotionally all the more powerful when you're confronted with something so evocative. It describes every one of us, our lives, and we have to live that moment so many times. Syntha Couldn’t post earlier, too busy crying after I read Leaving for Work. Can I blame it on the after pregnancy hormones? The baby’s only 8 months old (lol). It’s easier to just not think about it, but makes it emotionally all the more powerful when you’re confronted with something so evocative. It describes every one of us, our lives, and we have to live that moment so many times. Syntha

]]> By: everett (jake) ellis http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9219 everett (jake) ellis Mon, 07 May 2007 01:13:22 +0000 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9219 all is well when our protectors of our shours can also project visuels in words like they did --do we get to read the other six in thanks all is well when our protectors of our shours can also project visuels in words like they did –do we get to read the other six in thanks

]]> By: Karen http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9171 Karen Sun, 06 May 2007 06:49:55 +0000 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9171 Matthew is talented; his few chosen words for "Little Man" were more powerful than a whole chapter. We know his loves his family and is called to his job and struggles to make it all work. Bravo! Dorothy writing in the third person leaves the impression she is still tentative about this adventure. Her "thumping heart" description reminds me of my scary first days too. Merci! Jessica made me laugh out loud and feel like I was on that ladder with her going green. Well done! Matthew is talented; his few chosen words for “Little Man” were more powerful than a whole chapter. We know his loves his family and is called to his job and struggles to make it all work. Bravo!

Dorothy writing in the third person leaves the impression she is still tentative about this adventure. Her “thumping heart” description reminds me of my scary first days too. Merci!

Jessica made me laugh out loud and feel like I was on that ladder with her going green. Well done!

]]> By: Shelly Franz http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9140 Shelly Franz Sat, 05 May 2007 19:11:25 +0000 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9140 Wow, talk about talent! They can protect our waters, and write too! Plus, I'm sure the teacher had a little bit to do with it, *grin*. Wow, talk about talent! They can protect our waters, and write too! Plus, I’m sure the teacher had a little bit to do with it, *grin*.

]]> By: Chris & Terri http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9137 Chris & Terri Sat, 05 May 2007 14:53:46 +0000 http://www.stabenow.com/2007/05/05/underway-writers-workshop#comment-9137 Wonderful pieces. I wonder if taking the class while actually having the experience created some kind of synergy. Of course they have an excellent teacher as well ;-) Keep up the good work! Wonderful pieces. I wonder if taking the class while actually having the experience created some kind of synergy. Of course they have an excellent teacher as well ;-) Keep up the good work!

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